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« เมื่อ: พฤศจิกายน 27, 2008, 06:07:36 am »

โพสต์เมื่อ: Mar 12 2008, 12:16 AM

 No man's land
Ora B. Mar. 06, 2008


I suddenly poped in a no man's land
Unable to figure out where it is
Acted like a boss was he a China man
A fierce lady must be a spouse of his

They make me work hard with little enjoy
My nerve wreaking try to please that mississ
The hard I try the more mistake destroy
Afraid to take a break or out to eat

Her eyes on me like hyena at night
Every moves I made she seems to know all
Catched me find me and of course critizie
I don't know why I have to be here for

I am so lost not know how to return
Anyone know I missed, any concerns?



II

Ora B.
Mar. 07, 2008


Once all work done I am free to go home
Stepping out to another no man's land
Surely I am lost not know where I roam
From place to place a few dollor in hand

By myself downhearted depress and sad
I am so scare of everything around
Now missing my dear family so bad
Totally lost will I ever be found?

People unkind try to take advantage
I am very tried so what will I do
To get back home which way should I manage
My heart cry out, oh how can I get through

It was a nightmare now I understand
Sure gladly awake from the no man's land



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« ตอบ #1 เมื่อ: พฤศจิกายน 27, 2008, 06:10:19 am »

Ora B.     
โพสต์เมื่อ: Mar 30 2008, 01:48 AM

My eyes see something............untrue
I may think of you...................that much
Can my heart pursue...............same love?
Longed to feel your touch........trade this to none

Unable to change....................my mind
Probably know why.................warmhearted
Is it true love blind..................brainless?
A blame on my part.................passion partake

Sweet music goes on..............at first
Later on may hurt..................heartache
Can expect the worst..............what last!
See through real or fake..........fairness Nine Gems

Lesson to oneself....................savvy
Only almighty..........................measured
Born again beauty...................believe
Music of treasure.....................timeless radiant


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Seri Thassanasin    
โพสต์เมื่อ: Jul 6 2008, 09:37 AM
   
" I Cannot Live Without You"



I CANNOT live with you,
It would be life,
And life is over there
Behind the shelf

The ...ton keeps the key to,
Putting up
Our life, his porcelain,
Like a cup

Discarded of the housewife,
Quaint or broken;
A newer Sevres pleases,
Old ones crack.

I could not die with you,
For one must wait
To shut the other's gaze down, --
You could not.


And I, could I stand by
And see you freeze,
Without my right of frost,
Death's privilege?


Nor could I rise with you,
Because your face
Would put out Jesus',
That new grace

Glow plain and foreign
On my homesick eye,
Except that you, than he
Shone closer by.

They'd judge us -- how?
For you served Heaven, you know,
Or sought to;
I could not,

Because you saturated sight,
And I had no more eyes
For sordid excellence
As Paradise.

And were you lost, I would be,
Though my name
Rang loudest
On the heavenly fame.

And were you saved,
And I condemned to be
Where you were not,
That self were hell to me.

So we must keep apart,
You there, I here,
With just the door ajar
That oceans are,
And prayer,

And that pale sustenance,
Despair!



By- Emily Dickinson


Seri Thassanasin
โพสต์เมื่อ: Jul 6 2008, 10:01 AM
   
Emily Dickinson she is American poet. born on 10th December, 1830, in the town of Amherst, Massachusetts. Amherst, 50 miles from Boston.



Ora B.
โพสต์เมื่อ: Jul 7 2008, 06:40 AM
   
She is one of my favorite poets too.
The sad thing she got famous after passed away.


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นิค่ะ
โพสต์เมื่อ: Jul 7 2008, 01:46 PM
   
Welcome back ka Khun Ora B. and Khun Seree

Khun Ora B.,I like your piece....

"My eyes see something...untrue
I may think of you.........that much"

It's so nice...

Yes, Emily Dickenson, she is very famous
the one 'I can not live without you' is so true!


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Ora B.    
โพสต์เมื่อ: Jul 7 2008, 04:35 PM
   
QUOTE (Ora B. @ Mar 30 2008, 01:48 AM)
My eyes see something............untrue
I may think of you...................that much
Can my heart pursue...............same love?
Longed to feel your touch........trade this to none

Unable to change....................my mind
Probably know why.................warmhearted
Is it true love blind..................brainless?
A blame on my part.................passion partake

Sweet music goes on..............at first
Later on may hurt..................heartache
Can expect the worst..............what last!
See through real or fake..........fairness Nine Gems

Lesson to oneself....................savvy
Only almighty..........................measured
Born again beauty...................believe
Music of treasure.....................timeless radiant


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สวัสดีคะ

I have a Thai friend he is very good at Thai poetry suggested me to try English poem in a form of Thai poetry.
And so I did, actually I have written a few of them before this one.
You probably familiar with this form of Khloong.

The one I composed up there right after this one (following).
It is called Sonnet.

(But I call myself a daydreamer!)



Daydream
Ora B. Feb. 29, 2008


Please let me love you.. just love you only,
Please let me see you.. just want to see you
You came while I am all alone, lonely
Welcomed and felt belonged only us two
Allow me to express how my heartfelt
Sure, you already know that.. I.. love you
Happy in a way still somehow no help
Why my heart is aching and feeling blue
In the mind of a daydreamer sure pain
Want to love, be loved without commitment
And fallen in love all over again
The circle runs around will never ended
.......You may hear music of the frustration
.......Continue on.. reach no destination


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PS. Most of my poems are all about me.




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นิค่ะ
โพสต์เมื่อ: Jul 7 2008, 05:53 PM
   
Even you said you're written about yourself but it touch my heart too!

I'm not sure, whether it will familia to me like a Thai's style Klon or not. I know that I like the way you did. And still wonder, where am I be at that time?, when you posted this piece, cause I just saw it last night after follow khun Seree " I can not live without you". I always read your poem every time, but this one, may be we're on our ways back to Bangkok.

Yes,I remember now, on March 30th, we're on board to Buenos Aires, and continued to K.L. then to Bkk. so that why, I did not see it at all.

Daydream also good ka.


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Ora B.
โพสต์เมื่อ: Jul 8 2008, 06:26 AM
   
Thank you ma'am, you are so kind.

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